The week is almost over and I just thought I’d post a little update …I spent most of my free time this weekend working on my essay… but I feel like I have painfully little to show for it :/ I’ve got it close to 5 pages, but most of it I’d written earlier in the week and I’m still not terribly happy with what I currently have. Though I will say that it is better than when I first posted it on Friday 
One of the main things I’m struggling with for this essay is determining the most logical way to frame my essay, i.e. what things are important and relevant to talk about and what things are not. I still plan to edit out some of what I currently have posted because I’m not sure if it’s all relevant… but I’m going to wait to determine exactly what until I’ve gotten some more writing done.
If anyone has a chance to read my essay, feel free to give me any advice on how to frame it as well as other things I could talk about that I don’t currently have in my outline
Also, if you haven’t taken my poll yet, I’d appreciate it if you would! It’s super quick–only 1 question! I’ve actually gotten quite bit of response so far, it’s been really fun to see! I posted it on Facebook and have been surprised by some of the people who participated, but I think it has helped the participants to be more well rounded. However, now I wish that I’d done a more elaborate survey than just the one question! Oh well though, it’s still interesting. I’m sure quite how much I’m going to talk about the poll results in my essay, but I am planning to include them in some capacity.
A quick note to anyone with posted essays: I get a message that says I’m not allowed to comment on most of yours– Oscar’s was actually the only one that I was allowed to comment on. I think that mine is open for anyone to post comments, but if it’s not, someone please let me know!
